Yes, you did use crime as a noun. Can't remember what I was thinking. Thank you anyway. Your corrections are always helpful.

Hi Shelley,

I used “crime” as a noun as well. it is okay.

Glad my corrections are helpful :)

Yours,

Roi

Team Hebrewpod101.com

Thank you for your help. 1 Missed making rooms plural and understand the "in-B". 2. I think I used "crime" as a noun-not a verb-Can I still use it there? but tricky "gvoha ends with the hay and it already looked feminine-so it takes a double hay at end to make it feminine. 3. yes indeed a typo -I know how to spell "dira" I have noticed that my spelling is improving with practice on the site. 4. Another rephrase just like my previous one on another lesson. " It" is implied but not written. Can't seem to get this phrasing yet, but hope it will come naturally with time. Thank you for your encouragement.

Hi Shelley,

Good work! let's review -

1. Fixing - יש להם ציורים על הקירות של כל החדרים: בסלון ,בחדר השינה, בחדר האוכל ואפילו בחדר האמבטיה - Yes, the 'be' is needed before every new location that you mention.

2. fixing the typos - אנחנו לא רוצים לגור באזור של הפשיעה הגבוהה - note "פשיעה" is a feminine verb (גבוהה).

3. One typo in "apartment" - אנחנו יכולים להרשות לעצמנו דירה מרוהטת

4. Rephrasing - קשה מאוד למצוא חדרים בצורת עגול באזורי מגורים

Keep up the excellent work!

Yours,

Roi

Team Hebrewpod101.com

They have pictures on the walls of every room, the living room, the bedroom, the dining room even the bathroom. שי

להם ציורים על חקירות של כל הדר, בסלון ,חדר השינה, חדר האוכל אפילו חדר האמבטיהDo I need "b" in front of the listing of every room in this sentence for parallelism? I used it for living room because I didn't see it written as "cheder ha salon"

We don't want to live in a high crime rate area. אנחנו לו רוצים לגור באזור של הפשיעה הגבוה

We are able to afford a furnished apartment. אנחנו יכולים להרשות לעצמנו דורה מרוהטת

Round shaped rooms are very hard to find in residential areas. החדרים בצורת עגול חם קשה מאוד למצוא באזורי מגורים